Hello! I am a current hs senior applying to college. I am very anxious about my acceptances, as my GPA dropped from a 4.2 to a 3.6 from freshmen year to junior year. I will be very open about my situation, as I also wrote briefly about it in the Covid section in common app, but in a positive light by discussing how I grew.
It began with depression in lockdown along with taking difficult STEM classes online. Then in person junior year, I had family issues, jumped from med to med, and in and out of the mental hospital. I was also diagnosed very late with ADHD this past summer. Do not worry, I did not include any details in my brief explanation.
I have a very low GPA and SAT for the competitive nursing school. I also didn’t plan on applying to any prestigious schools, but people convinced me to apply ED to Cornell College of Human Ecology, and I chose Human Development as my major. I checked Naviance and there has been students at my school with similar stats that got in, but they were probably athletes or legacy. I did some research and saw that the acceptance rate for ED College of Human Ecology is around 40%? I think I show that I am a fitting candidate in my other areas, such as my ECs and best performance in classes that are Human Development prep. But, I know that I have like 1/1000000000 chance of getting in, so I would like you all to be brutally honest and shut any hope down.
Demographics
- US domestic (US citizen or permanent resident) or international student
US citizen - State/Location of residency: (state is important if you apply to any state universities)
Maryland - Type of high school (current college for transfers):
Public high school in the third richest county in the USA, so fairly competitive? - Gender/Race/Ethnicity (optional): Female/South Asian/Bengali
- Other special factors (first generation to college, legacy, athlete, etc.):
Veteran father?
Intended Major(s)
Nursing. Human Development in Cornell
GPA, Rank, and Test Scores
- Unweighted HS GPA: 2.9
- Weighted HS GPA (incl. weighting system): 3.6
- College GPA (for transfers): N/A
- Class Rank: N/A
- ACT/SAT Scores: 650 in ela, 610 in math, 1260 total
Not sending to Cornell of course.
Coursework
(AP/IB/Dual Enrollment classes, AP/IB scores for high school; also include level of math aforeign language reached and any unusual academic electives; for transfers, describe your college courses and preparation for your intended major(s))
AP Compsci, English 9 Gifted & Talented
AP Psych, English 10 GT, Alg 2 GT,
APES, AP Human Geo, US History GT, Biology GT, Human Growth & Dev GT/Dual Enrollment
English 11 Honors, US Gov Honors
Independent Research 1 & 2 GT,
Chemistry GT, French 2, 3, 4 Honors
Math 141 College Algebra dual enrollment
English 121 dual enrollment,
Modern World History honors,
Anatomy & Physiology, Band, Precalc honors
Business Calc GT, PE/Health
Alg 1 GT, French 1, Geometry GT were taken
in middle school
GT is weightiest same as AP.
Awards
County cheerleading champs
Extracurriculars
(Include leadership, summer activities, competitions, volunteering, and work experience)
Founder/President of Psych club,
Neurology Internship, UNICEF,
HOSA, Receptionist at nail salon,
Babysitting, Model UN,
Essays/LORs/Other
(Optionally, guess how strong these are and include any other relevant information or circumstances.)
I would like to preface and say that the following is not to brag, just to try to encompass every little good thing I may have. I think my common app essay is fairly strong. I discussed the unique identity complex I had about being a muslim military brat, how I eventually accepted myself, and how my dad was treated after 9/11. It’s partly a narrative piece of a memory. Everyone I showed it to either raved about it, or said it’s a good essay. I was told I was an amazing writer by a few.
My Cornell College of Human Ecology essay is definitely less stronger, since I decided to apply ED last minute- and wrote it last minute. I discussed how I lived in Fort Drum which is in upstate New York- and fell in love with Cornell when I was young. Then, I moved on to why and how I am interested to Human Development + Psychology. Next, I discussed my plan on being a child psychiatric mental health nurse practitioner to give back to the world, and help kids receive the mental health care just like I received. Again, it’s last minute and not the best. However, everyone said it’s good and they liked it. My nursing supplementals for other school I believe are quite strong.
Cost Constraints / Budget
(High school students: please get a budget from your parents and use the Net Price Calculators on the web sites of colleges of interest.)
My parents told me to apply…
Schools
(List of colleges by your initial chance estimate; designate if applying ED/EA/RD; if a scholarship is necessary for affordability, indicate that you are aiming for a scholarship and use the scholarship chance to estimate it into the appropriate group below)
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Safety (certain admission and affordability)
Salisbury U Pre Nursing, UMBC Pre Nursing -
Target *
Rutgers U Nursing, GMU Nursing,
Temple U Nursing, UVermont,
UCincinnati Nursing,
Rhode Island College Nursing,
Umaine Nursing -
Likely (would be possible, but very unlikely or surprising, for it not to admit or be affordable)
Ohio State Nursing, Michigan State Nursing,
Udel Nursing, Uconn Nursing -
Reach
Cornell, Upitt Nursing, UMD, Penn State Nursing, Umass Nursing