<p>Alright, so heres the deal. Im a procrastinator. My ED deadline is in a little over a week. I NEED someone to tell me if this is a good idea or if I should scrap it altogether. Im a hardcore gamer, I strive for success in gaming. I actually have a full essay for the ED college done, with gaming being mentioned quite strenuously. It would be amazing if someone could read this and tell me if Im on the write track or not. </p>
<p>Please PM or ask me to PM you. Thnx</p>
<p>You know, this question comes up a lot, so I wonder if they get a lot of essays on the topic, especially at the tech schools. I am not a fan of this topic, although I concede that it could be done well. I’ll read it if you don’t mind a skeptical review. Please include the prompt and what school you are applying to (just so I have an idea how good it needs to be, I’ll keep that private.)</p>
<p>I have to say you need to check it for grammar and spelling. write s/b right, and strenuously isn’t used correctly, although I understand what you are trying to say…</p>
<p>Interesting approach, I’ve never seen video games in an essay.</p>
<p>Where are you wanting to apply?
Some colleges may applaud the innovation and think it’s creative and humorous and unique, while others would find it childish. Think about what your ED college is.</p>