<p>I am in dire need of help/input on my essay. I've had a lot of input from people that know me -- my brother (a creative writing major at Oberlin) kind of helped me in the general idea and form of the essay, and I've had several people look at it. The general consensus is that is is not personal enough, and I see that. I still am attached to it though. My teacher today hinted at scrapping it so I was pretty upset (not in front of her though). I've spent hours working and thinking about this essay and I just want it to be done!</p>
<p>Anyway I need someone who doesn't know me personally to read it and offer constructive criticism. Please don't respond if you only have like 60 posts...I need someone that can really help and has a good reputation. Thanks guys and good luck to everyone in these crazy times!</p>