What do I deserve on my essay?

Test Preparation SAT Preparation
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<p>I just want to see if I really deserved what I got or not/how lucky I was.</p>

<p>Taken from October SAT</p>

<p>ASSIGNMENT:Is it important for people to spend time outdoors and to learn to appreciate the natural environment? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.
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<p>Please respond with what you think I received on this essay /12 and why!</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>i would say a 9…</p>

<p>your ideas are very concrete and you describe them a lot but I think your thesis is kind of weak in general in that it’s kind of just a repetition in the prompt and too general.</p>

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<p>i’m sorry, this is 10 or 12 :(</p>

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<p>thanks both duckblase and happymunkee!</p>

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<p>What did you get? Btw, I can’t use imageshack because I’m IP banned for uploading p0rn. Jk. Chinese users can’t use it anymore.</p>

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<p>I got an 11. I was pretty surprised.
They banned youtube and facebook and wikipedia too D:.</p>