Oh boy Otto. Pretend I’m an AO at Harvard. Do I admit the kid with amazing grades, test scores, and mental health issues, or the kid with amazing grades, test scores and no mental health issues? Sure, thousands of kids write about that, but they do NOT, by and large, get into top colleges by writing about their grades being subpar due to their mental health.
I do essay advising professionally. I’ve had students admitted to a lot of wonderful colleges, including some with >10% acceptance rates. I have had one student write about her mental illness, and she did a good enough job, but I don’t recommend anyone choose it as a topic. She wasn’t aiming high, and she absolutely wanted to write about it. She wrote about eventually making friends with someone at the residential treatment program she was in. Her original essay was literally so full of anger and fear that I could feel my heart racing as I read it. That kind of essay helps no one get in.
My favorite essays have ALL been about something the student was truly passionate about. One girl wrote about candlelight and her love for her religion. A guy wrote about his fear of mannequins as a young kid and wanting to create prosthetics to help people. Another guy wrote about his trip doing research in a very rural and isolated mountain community. I can say honestly that the kids who write about something important to them that helps shed light on their personality fare better in admissions than the students who insist on writing about their parents’ divorce, or why they didn’t get good grades, or a major illness.
Bottom line, colleges want to admit kids who can succeed in their school. They want revenue, high retention rates, high graduation rates and good reputations for keeping students on campus. Students with mental health issues are far more likely to drop out, fail, transfer, miss class, not be involved in campus life, require extra resources on campus, etc… They know that mental health issues can recur.
There is nothing wrong with having a mental health issue. Pointing it out to the people who want to see if you are a good fit for their college is not a good idea. Furthermore, are you a person who worked through a mental health issue, admirably showing determination and resiliency, like the thousands of others who will write the same thing? Or are you a person who plays harmonica at a retirement home on Sunday afternoons, researches insects in his spare time, loves April Fool’s day, and helps his little brother rake leaves so they can both jump in the pile? I know who I’d rather admit. College want to admit people they LIKE. Be more than just your mental illness.