<p>I chose the Common Application prompt that says "Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content."
I wrote the essay and thought it was decent, but another school specified essay asked me to pick one word to describe me and I wrote one, that I felt, was far stronger. I let my AP Literature teacher read both and she seemed to love the Common App one far better and said the school specific one was good, in theory, but it wasn't as strong as the other.
Can someone read both and tell me which is the stronger one?</p>
<p>Bump</p>
<p>Feel free to send them my way, I’d be happy to look over them.</p>
<p>I can take a look too</p>
<p>I can help (:</p>
<p>Bump. Any CC members with experience? Sorry, I just don’t trust new members with my essays. </p>
<p>PM me for my opinion on which one.</p>
<p>I’m here to help</p>
<p>I can help.</p>