Why Penn?

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Pennsylvania
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<p>Hey there</p>

<p>Does anybody want to read and criticize the first draft of my "Why Penn?" essay? I'm a bit insecure about it...
Also how long is it supposed to? Is 316 words too short? Too long?</p>

<p>Thanks a lot in advance!!</p>

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<p>yea ill to read it</p>

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<p>i can read Rister and happy to offer comments. I guess it's 300 words.</p>

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<p>Allo~ I'll read it. I am not applying to Penn this year.</p>

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<p>My Why Penn essay was 650. They really like to hear about specifics, so try to find something not many people will talk about.</p>

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<p>hey ill read it</p>

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<p>PM me, I'd be more than willing to read. My Penn app's already been submitted.</p>

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<p>I talked about Will Smith and cheese steaks...
and rocky...</p>

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<p>I'll take a look if you still need more people. I applied ED and was deferred though, so use caution :D</p>

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<p>I'll provide feedback.</p>

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<p>sure I'll take a look</p>

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<p>I already sent in my upenn app but i'll be happy to read your essay.</p>

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<p>sure ill take a look at it</p>

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<p>hey, you can pm your essay to me. I applied ed this year. are you doing huntsman rd?</p>