Will I get rejected? D:

<p>So, I'm in a pre-med program with my school and I wrote an essay about a clinical experience I had at a hospital. My first choice school is rice, and I haven't submitted the essay there yet (thank god)...I applied to one back up school, and two match schools. In the essay I exaggerated a little bit. XD I didn't know it would be a big deal. I was trying to make my essay more....interesting. And some of the procedures I talked about weren't entirely true. My teacher asked me today if I actually did all that stuff. And it depressed me...bcuz it sounds like I'm already in the healthcare field when I'm not...according to her...but a lot of this really did happen...its just that I kinda get to do more than the average student.... Like one of the things i put in my essay was that i changed out the blood on an infusion pump (all I did was get the blood from the blood bank and placed it above the infusion pump while the nurse programmed it...so it's not like I lied....I just exaggerated/forgot to include her. I didn't do it myself). Or something else I said was that I activated a code blue on the patient I was emotionally bonded to (the nurses activated, I just assisted...but I think I could activate if I encountered a patient myself. I think anyone could. If I was on clinicals right now and I saw a patient in VF, I'd push the code button :/) but the three people I let read before I submitted it told me it was awesome and heart gripping (the conclusion was pretty awesome)....but will this hurt me? On my transcript they could see that I was in a premed program for three years...and this year I have clinical rotations. :/</p>

<p>The other thing is that in my essay I sounded a little cocky to the doctor, possibly :/. The doctor made a rude statement and I told him that I didn't believe the patient would die. Is that cocky? The way I worded it to the doctor wasn't really cocky, but it could be read as cocky. </p>

<p>Thanks! </p>

<p>P.S. Sorry for the text grammar. I'm typing this from my phone.</p>

<p>So 42 people viewed this, but not one person replied?
-.-</p>

<p>If you eliminated details that impact the meaning–even if those you did include are technically true–you lied. Rewrite it honestly.</p>

<p>I am going to rewrite it, but I already submitted this essay to three universities. :confused: Will it hurt me?</p>

<p>It really shouldn’t hurt you. Realistically speaking, everyone (including several friends who were accepted into Ivy League schools) embellishes in their essays. Given that they have so many applications to review and so many essays to read, I highly doubt that they would randomly select your essay and decide to look into it to make sure you were telling the truth. They just want to see if your story was interesting, fictional or not, if it defines your character, and if your writing skills are proficient. Unless you wrote something outlandish like “I discovered a cure for cancer but nobody knows,” then I highly doubt it will impact your chances of acceptance. Best of luck.</p>