Will someone be willing to read over my rough essay?

College Essays
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<p>I've redone it a bit so far, and this is just a rough version of it so far. I'm hoping for suggestions/ratings. </p>

<p>The prompt is:</p>

<p>Describe how your academic achievements, personal interests, and life experiences have helped prepare you to succeed academically and to be an active member of the UC community. (Please limit your response to approximately 250 words.)</p>

<p>What I have right now is 233.</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

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<p>sure, i dont mind reading it</p>

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<p>I'd love to read a short one...pm it over</p>

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<p>BUMP please.</p>

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<p>yeah sure i'll read it</p>

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<p>Anyone else mind reading one of my other rough essays?</p>