<p>Um.... it's a Statement of Purpose essay, in which:</p>
<p>The statement of purpose will provide an opportunity to explain any extenuating circumstances that you feel could add value to your application. You may also want to explain unique aspects of your academic background or valued experiences you may have had that relate to your academic discipline. The statement of purpose is not meant to be a listing of accomplishments in high school or a record of your participation in school-related activities. Rather, this is your opportunity to address the admissions committee directly and to let us know more about you as an individual, in a manner that your transcripts and other application information cannot convey. </p>
<p>It's only 120 eighty-character lines of text, which is a little bit more than 1.5 pages, easy read. If you're interested I can PM you. I really need critiques not criticism. BIG DIFFERENCE. I need to know what I can do to make my essay even better, it's my sophomore year, and basically my last chance to get the heck out of here. Thanks a bunch!</p>