Will these hooks make me different enough for the Ivy League? Chancing back.

<p>Looking at HYPSM level schools next fall, and my academic side is fine (>2350 SAT, top 2% of class) but thousands of people can say the same. Tell me - is my extracurricular side impressive enough to make me stand out? </p>

<p>My plan is to be an entrepreneur/businessman, and to do an undergrad engineering degree. My app will revolve around this pitch.</p>

<p>White male public school here.</p>

<p>[ul]Founded a nonprofit themed 5k that raised over 20k.[/ul]</p>

<p>[ul]Taught myself Portuguese, French, Italian, and spoken Mandarin (in addition to Spanish at school) for international business endeavors.[/ul]</p>

<p>[ul]State winners of environmental competition (I want to be aware of how the environment and big business find balance).[/ul]</p>

<p>[ul]Been investing for over a year.[/ul]</p>

<p>[ul]Have published short stories in actual magazines (this is to round me out some). I also write novels but they haven't seen the light of day? I'll mention it if I can.[/ul]</p>

<p>[ul]Part-time job for over a year.[/ul]</p>

<p>I don't want to sound snooty but does all this sound impressive? And will colleges understand why a businessman might want to major in engineering, or will they suspect foul play? (it's not funny business, it's the course of study I actually want to follow.)</p>

<p>Bumping 10char</p>

<p>That is really impressive. Those hooks really will make all the difference.
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<p>I believe these will help you definitely.
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<p>You are defiantly someone who has done unique things but so has a ton of other kids. Don’t feel bad if you don’t get into the school you really want to because its a top school so students with perfect grades and perfect test scores don’t get accepted every year.</p>