<p>For one of the colleges, I am writing about the benefits of an diverse educational community.</p>
<p>Can I approach it like how the diverse educational school system encourages us to do stuff beyond just school work?</p>
<p>Go for it, just don’t put so much fluff that it puts them to sleep. Colleges want to get to know you and you must be able to manifest your essay and represent your beliefs.</p>
<p>Yeah I made it personal. It’s about how the diverse educational community benefited me</p>
<p>Thanks c:</p>