Willing intelligent critique of CA essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hey,
I've revised my Common App essay and now I'm not too sure where to go with it. Any help would be appreciated! pm for essay.</p>

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<p>I will help/edit your essay.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. PM me.</p>

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<p>I don’t mind taking a look.</p>

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<p>Thanks for the help guys. Still looking for more readers! It’s unique and witty and I’m applying to ivies so some harsh criticism would be excellent.</p>

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<p>I don’t mind either…</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too.</p>

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<p>PM me your copy too</p>