Would anyone be kind enough to read my common app long and short essays?

College Essays
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<p>Hello World!</p>

<p>I was wondering if anyone would like to read and comment on my common app essays.
To just give a bit of background information, I'm an international student from Dubai, U.A.E, who hasn't applied for financial aid.
Decent SAT scores - 2240 (single sitting) and SAT 2 - MLevel2= 790, Physics= 740.
GPA - n/a (I'm in an Indian curriculum based school, if you really want to know what it's like kindly mention it in your PM)
I don't want to bore anyone with my EC's, if you are kind enough to read my essays they will be easily identified. Oh and I've applied to the following universities: (I'm not sure if this information helps, yes I'm a newbie/noob to cc :) )
Brown
Princeton
U Penn
Cornell
Carnegie Mellon
Harvey Mudd
Dartmouth
Duke
Amherst
WUSTL</p>

<p>Just PM me and I'll send them over. Thank you for bearing with me :)</p>

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<p><em>bump</em> 30 views and no one is willing to read an essay?</p>

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<p>I will read them…but isn’t it too late? Aren’t the apps submitted?</p>

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<p>I’ve PMed you the essay. Thanks a lot for taking off time to read it.
And yes I have already sent my application, I just need people’s honest opinions on it so I can gauge the quality of my essay. :)</p>

<p>If anyone else would like to read it then please don’t hesitate to post.</p>

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<p>sure :)</p>

<p>10ch</p>

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<p>Thanks for reading.
I’ve sent it to you.</p>

<p>Keep 'em coming. :)</p>

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<p>I wouldn’t mind.</p>

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<p>sure. .</p>

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<p>i dont mind reading it
send it</p>

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<p>sure, PM me if you want. hope it’s not too late for you</p>

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<p>I don’t mind taking a look if you still want :)</p>

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<p>A little late for essay editing lol. But sure, PM me!</p>

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<p>If you’re still interested, PM me, I would love to read it</p>

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<p>I’d love to too if you are still PMing them, that is.</p>

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<p>PM me and I’ll take a look. But perhaps you could look at mine?</p>

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<p>Oooh,i would LOVE to read! :slight_smile:
PM me please?</p>

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<p>i’d love to read it!
PM mee</p>

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<p>PM me. I’d love to read</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it. (I PMed you already though, haha.)</p>