<p>I wrote it on having a learning disability. Sort of a mix of the question about failure and the other question about an essential part of you. I'd appreciate it if someone wanted to read mine over and help me with it!</p>
<p>There is a list somewhere of trusted readers who will give you feedback. Do not just give your essay to anyone because their is a possibility they could take it. Usually the higher the post count, the more they can be trusted.</p>
<p>I wouldn’t mind looking at your essay. Do you want line-by-line notes, or just broader developmental comments? I’m cool doing either, also – and this should be obvious – but try to pick out any obvious misspellings or grammatical flaws before you have people on CC look at your essay, not because we don’t want to help you (we do) but it’s was easier to do a productive edit when all the small stuff is out of the way.</p>