Would this be appropriate for UC #2?

College Essays
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<p>I want to write about how I help out my family, namely my little sister and my grand parents. Do you think that is an alright response to</p>

<p>Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud, and how does it relate to the person you are? *</p>

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<p>yes. i would say it's a quality/contribution</p>

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<p>Yeah, definitely!</p>

<p>It shows that you really care for your family, plus its a contribution, or an experience at the least. Sounds good.</p>

<p>Good luck writing it though..theyre due tomorrow!</p>

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<p>I have about 250 words in already. It all sounds so forced though :( I cant make it fluid</p>