[acolor=#FFA500]Decision: Deferred [/color]
SAT I (breakdown): 740 M 720 R
ACT (breakdown): 34 (35 E 35 R 34 M 34 S)
SAT II: 780 US History 700 Math II
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.924
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): n/a
AP (place score in parenthesis): taken 5 so far
IB (place score in parenthesis): n/a
Senior Year Course Load: AP Gov, AP Macro, AP Euro, AP Calc AB, APES, AP Lit
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): Awarded by big college as one of the top 10 young entrepreneurs in the country (not saying cause i will give myself away)
Eagle Scout
Academic All State Track
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):
National Honor Society
National Spanish Honor Society
National Social Studies Honor Society
Prom Committee (Chair)
Basketball (Captain JV Year)
Club basketball
Track and Field
(Student ambassador) to China: only one in my grade selected. hosted student from our partner school and stayed with a family in Beijing for two weeks
Boy Scouts (Senior Patrol Leader)
College basketball club at my school (Founder and President): Pretty much a club where we meet once a month and talk about college basketball and make a tournament pool in March.
(Founding member) of local school club working to serve disadvantaged youth in my city
Job/Work Experience:
(Founder/CEO) Running my own sneaker and clothing resale service, over $30,000 in global sales
Intern with my city’s NBA team (again, not saying cause too much personal info). I do a bit of everything with them from scouting to salary cap analysis, and I probably should’ve played this more in my app.
Interned with district representative to congress over the summer
Volunteer/Community service:
Eagle Scout award
Food Bank and Salvation Army donations/helping with organizing
Boys and Girls club twice a week
Sandwich making for homeless shelter every so often
Teen board for pediatric cancer foundation
Founding member of local school club working to serve disadvantaged youth in my city
Presidential Service award
Summer Activities:
Intern with congressman
Sneaker and clothing reselling
Touring colleges (lit)
Essays (rating 1-10, details):
Common app 9.3/10: Wrote about my entrepreneurial endeavor in sneakers and the shortcomings that i’ve experienced, wove in personal traits and goals for the future and humanity as a whole. common theme was that when i was 6 i wanted some brand new red nikes but we coulnd’t afford them, and i began to sell shoes later and eventually bought the exact same shoes on ebay, and what i do helps other fulfill their “red shoe dreams” No essay is perfect, but i spent the entire summer grinding it out
Something else: 9.5/10: Wrote about how community is important to me and that i extensively participate in r/nba, which led to my growing interest in basketball and eventually landing my internship with my NBA team
Why apply to Yale: 8.7/10: excited about learning with like-minded students but also the other things (social, traditions, etc) that the college and New Haven has to offer (pretty basic stuff nothing special)
Community engagement: 9.99999/10: Freakin love this essay. I wrote about how I was a fire truck obsessed toddler and a rookie police officer/fire fighter took an interest with me. We kept in touch, and for my Eagle project, I created, organized, promoted, and executed a community engagement event with him dealing about the town’s department of public safety and what they have to offer.
What inspires you: I am inspired by a desire to better myself. When I make a major decision, I first reflect inward for positive affirmation and ask myself, “would the future me think this is a good idea?"
Teaching a course: Welcome to “People and Ideas that Have Unexpectedly Made the World Better,” where we will examine how intuitive people innovate to improve the world, despite socioeconomic barriers, circumstances, and limitations.
Who you inviting: I love popcorn so I would invite Charles Cretors, who developed the first commercial popcorn machine. I would ask him if he ever imagined popcorn would become ubiquitous to the movie-going experience and sporting events.
What you bringing to suite: My friendly, inclusive, witty and organized nature will foster a cohesive bond in our diverse suite to create a smooth transition and support our shared desire to grow and succeed at Yale and in life.
Why choose selected academia: I selected academic areas focusing on politics, social sciences and global humanities. I am fascinated by government and politics; my self-selected Bar Mitzvah theme was inspired by the 2012 Presidential Election. Traveling to China in 2015 as a student ambassador broadened my appreciation for global affairs and interest in Asia. I chose programs encompassing my favorite areas of study, and which will allow me to help others through a greater understanding of human sciences and how the world interacts. Along with innovation and diplomacy, such understanding will improve my personal relations and ability to advance worldwide social and economic development.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Teacher Rec #1: 9.5/10:
AP Physics teacher and basketball coach. Named me captain JV year. I enjoyed his class, and he seemed to enjoy me
Teacher Rec #2: 9/10
History teacher. Have had him twice. Great guy, and have enjoyed his courses. Writes great recs in general
Counselor Rec: 9/10. Submitted approaching her deadline very close due to familial issues, but she has been really supportive of everything and a positive influence
Additional Rec: 8.7/10 (APUSH teacher)
Not sure if they got it because she is a traditionalist and made us give stamped envelopes for her recs, but she took a liking to me and writes solid recs
Interview:
Was actually with alum of high school. Connected about that, talked for over hour and a half about my values and morals, what i want to do in the future, my business, internship with NBA team, and life in general. Went really well, and she offered help when I called her about my deferral
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: no
Intended Major: Ethics, politics, and economics
State (if domestic applicant): TX
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: Large public
Ethnicity: White
Gender: Male
Income Bracket: Upper middle class
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.):
Double legacy
Single mother household (does that count?)
Mom had cancer sophomore year
Reflection:
Not the result that I wanted, but I’m still glad that I’m in the running. Going to get a rec from the GM (the guy I mainly work with) of the NBA team that I work with, and another teacher
Strengths: Essays, non garden variety ECs, interview, ACT (maybe)
Weaknesses:
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: GPA, lack of leadership, possibly recs (can’t read them but I doubt they’re bad)
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected: Indiana(Kelley), Dean’s scholarship
General Comments :
sending good vibes to March 28th and New Haven