<p>Anyone willing to read? I'm thinking of completely starting the essay over again, but I'm not sure.
My prompt was, "Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content. What do you do or experience there, and why is it meaningful to you?"</p>
<p>I will review back, by the way!</p>
<p>Without having read it, I will just note that this is a very difficult prompt to answer in a compelling way. Contentment is boring. Narrative is driven not necessarily by unhappiness, but definitely by conflict of some kind. </p>
<p>I tried to put a spin on my response to it. </p>
<p>I’d be willing to read it, just PM it to me:)</p>
<p>sure, PM me</p>