<p>"I came screaming into the world with a vacuum attached to my head in order to help me out." (For my Autobiographical QB Essay)</p>
<p>:D</p>
<p>What's yours?</p>
<p>Edit: It's true, hahah. I found out a few weeks ago from my mother.</p>
<p>LOL. Looks like a fun topic. </p>
<p>"On July 8th, 2008, I went to prison."</p>
<p>(Not for crimes, just in case you're wondering.)</p>
<p>(You know what would be really fun? If enough people post and if we can put together a really incoherent but cool essay from all the people's openings :) )</p>
<p>"I has a shuvel."</p>
<p>Hahah I see what you mean, limetime.</p>
<p>"I came screaming into the world with a vacuum attached to my head in order to help me out. I has a shuvel. Afterwards, I went to prison."</p>
<p>you shouldn't use "in order to"
it's unecessary words
all you need is the "to"</p>
<p>"It was a dark and stormy night ..."</p>
<p>"Call me Ishmael"</p>
<p>"so i woke up in this dumpster in Connecticut"</p>
<p>"To tell the truth, I don’t even remember the day that changed my life..."</p>
<p>Or something like that. I'm too lazy to open Word.</p>
<p>"I found myself stuck in a stalemate at Panda Express."</p>
<p>"I am not helping you pass anymore drug tests"</p>
<p>"The slimy menhaden fish slips from my hand as I watch the captain rip the menhaden he’s holding down the middle – bone and all."</p>
<p>"My main attraction to Bowdoin has been its strong programs in the natural sciences."</p>
<p>"I was born in the USSR"</p>
<p>"A part of me would like to romanticize our meeting, to portray it as a twist of fate
in a world full of uncertainties."</p>
<p>“Not looking so good in the Northeast today, humidity close to 100% in the New York and Philadelphia areas and temperatures soaring up to a sweltering 95 degrees in Boston. I’ve got to say, Mark, it’s going to be a hot one.”</p>
<p>yeah I know it's two sentences but they function as one.
I love yours lifeisabigidea</p>
<p>Etched into the wall of the Lincoln Memorial were the words Abraham Lincoln so eloquently spoke one-hundred and forty-six years ago, “Government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth.” </p>
<p>Like mine?? It's about my trip to Washington, DC</p>
<p>A vinyl record rotates carelessly on the table to my left as reality is forced into a state of limbo.</p>
<p>It’s hard to explain how I felt screaming uncontrollably while plummeting 350 feet towards white-water-rapids-filled doom.</p>
<p>"I turned the key and opened the door"</p>
<p>It's my mail box door, though, in case you are wondering.</p>
<p>dasted22 - I recommend saying "towards a white-water-rapids-filled doom"</p>