Also need very critical eye to read essay! Please, it would be appreciated greatly!

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<p>I made a MASSIVE mistake and thus need to send out an essay tomorrow (if curious, see: <a href="http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/barnard-college/416232-horrible-mistake-advice-words-wisdom.html?highlight=barnard%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/barnard-college/416232-horrible-mistake-advice-words-wisdom.html?highlight=barnard&lt;/a&gt;)&lt;/p>

<p>I have a draft, and would greatly appreciate a critical eye. I don't have time to perfect it to the degree I would like, so the more anal you are, the better. I don't mind harsh comments; I just want the end result to parallel my other Barnard essays!</p>

<p>Thanks, and I will OWE YOU if you help! Can you hear the desperation in my keystrokes? It is there!</p>

<p>Oh, also, my essay needs to be a “well-developed paragraph,” and it may be long for that (380 words). :/</p>

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<p>send it over if you like</p>

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<p>Sent, iorifan. Thanks!</p>

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<p>SUPER bump! I need to send this essay tomorrow. :(</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>email me! I love critiquing essays!</p>

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<p>Thanks, PMed!</p>

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<p>pm me if you still need help=)</p>

<p>gl!</p>

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<p>If you still need i can help</p>

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<p>PMed a little bit ago. Hopefully you will get, as I will send them soon.</p>