Anyone want to give feedback on my essay? + another question

College Essays
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<p>I read this book in my 5th grade that influenced me , but
because i was so young i didn't care to remember or memorize the
title of the book. i can still remember the whole summary, but i can't
remember the title now. does it look bad if i just refer to the book as
' the book' and not mention its name? </p>

<p>and if anyone is interested in reading my essay please leave a comment
I would really appreciate it it if someone is nice enough to give me an honest feedback and grammar correction by this Sunday.</p>

<p>Thank you in advance :D</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, PM me. </p>

<p>And about the book thing, do you remember any of the character names because then you should be able to google it.</p>

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<p>Thank you so much! :smiley: I’ll PM you by 6 o clock I’m just fixing something in my essay
THANK YOU X 10000!</p>

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<p>anyone else interested?</p>