Anyone want to revise my first UC personal statement? (Prompt one)

College Essays
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<p>Would anyone mind to read and revise/give suggestions to my first UC essay? And please don't plagiarize. Thanks!</p>

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<p>I'd be glad to. I'm a college newspaper editor and am not filing any admissions essays. (Transfer apps don't need 'em, yay.) Shoot it to <a href="mailto:travis.bushman@gainsco.com">travis.bushman@gainsco.com</a>. :)</p>

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<p>anyone else? :D</p>

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<p>i'll read it, pm it over.</p>

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<p>I'll give it a shot, just send it over. :]</p>

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<p>Ill read it and even try to edit it if possible :)</p>

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<p>i will try it too =)</p>

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<p>I'll read it as well. PM me.</p>

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<p>I'll try it out. PM me
I've also done it too...
is this prompt 1?
mine is really personal but i will send it to you if u send me urs...
well thanks</p>

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<p>ill take a look. pm me</p>