<p>Hi everyone,</p>
<p>I've written an essay for the UC prompt:
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Describe the world you come from for example, your family, community or school and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations. *
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<p>It's about my life, and its quite personal.</p>
<p>If you're an non-09er, please PM or reply here, and i will send it to you asap so you can review it.</p>
<p>Hello there, I would like to read your essay and provide feedback on it. I am an 09'er, but I am already finished with both essays and just need some revision.</p>
<p>Ok, PM sent</p>
<p>I'm willing to read it. You can PM it if you want.</p>
<p>I'll read it and give you feedback. PM me if you want to,</p>
<p>I finished both of my essays (one on religion and one on my mom), and my English teacher said they were among the best she has ever read.</p>
<p>I'd like to help you out as well - send me a PM, and I'll send you a critique the moment I finish reading it. :)</p>