<p>(Disclaimer: essay may not be totally awesome)</p>
<p>I am looking for some cool dudes to review my essay and help me improve it. This essay describes how my art has affected me. I'll PM it to anyone who wants to help me.</p>
<p>I greatly appreciate it.</p>
<p>Haha, my essay is on the same topic. 
I’ll review it for you; if you want I can send you mine too, though it isn’t quite done yet.</p>
<p>I would be happy to critique it for you.</p>
<p>I’m cool and I do art too. ;D (1/3 of my essay is about it) PM me and I’ll critique it</p>
<p>sure, pm me</p>
<p>Alright, I sent my essay to everyone who responded. NuclearTide, I would be happy to look over your essay, you can PM it to me.</p>
<p>haha mine is on art as well. i’d be happy to critique PM!</p>
<p>Wow, I received a lot of great advice from everyone who responded! I really appreciate it. letstalkcollege, I’ll send you my essay as well.</p>