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Do you believe that one should sacrifice life for liberty?

“The history of humanity is an incessant searching for liberty”. I strongly believe that every single man should sacrifice his life in order to obtain his liberty. To live without the most important right that humans have is dying. There are many examples of people that try to get their liberty such as the struggles of the prison mates to scape; heroes that fought for the independence of their natal town or the unfinished efforts of slaves to get their freedom.
One illustrated example of sacrificing life for liberty is the attempts made by prison mates to get away. In the serie “Prison break” the two main characters made a plan to get off from the jale because they couldn´t endure the violence lived in that place. Thus, they tried the plan knowing the difficulty of this and the tragic consequences that could bring. This shows how this two men risked their lives with only one target, liberty.
On the other hand, there were important soldiers who combat to obtain the independence of their town or country. For instance, the general José de San Martín was an important military whose campaigns were very importants to accomplish the independence of Argentina, Chile and Peru. Thus, this man gives his life in every battle in order to achieve the liberty of these Latin-Americans countries
In addition, there are a lot of examples of slaves in back times that made struggles to became into a free men. For instance, in the movie “Gladiator” a recognized soldier is accused to murder the imperator. However, he wasn’t guilty and was betrayed by the imperator´s son. Thus, then this man that was so popular turned into a slave. However, he risked his life in every combat to became a free man and to take revenge of the imperator´s son.
In conclusion, one thing is clear: a man can´t live without liberty. So, no matter the consequences a man had to do everything to get his liberty. The liberty is a right for excellence and we have to fight for it. In effect, after a long struggle, it comes a great recompense