<p>Hi, everyone!</p>
<p>I've finished writing my common app essay (over the word-limit, but I'll deal with that later). My main problem is organization. Would anyone be so kind to read it and edit some points/ help me organize it? English is my second language, and writing has never been my forte. Please help.</p>
<p>Thanks so much.</p>
<p>What’s your first language?</p>
<p>haha uhm…why?</p>
<p>bump. Someone, please help. </p>
<p>I’ll chance back and/or read your essay :)</p>
<p>pm me it. can’t guarantee ill have time tonight, but ill do it in the next day or so</p>
<p>I can read/critique</p>
<p>Thanks! </p>
<p>Anyone else??</p>
<p>I’ll do it for you.</p>
<p>I’m not sure if it’s actually a hard word limit or not… So confusing.</p>
<p>Hit me up…</p>
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Because knowing that, I could analyse your mistakes in a better way.</p>
<p>i haven’t gotten it yet…</p>
<p>haha okay it’s Farsi…I’m still not sure how that’ll help, but thanks :)</p>
<p>imasophomore, sorry! I’ll send it again right now.</p>
<p>Just a warning: it’s a pretty weak essay right now. I realize it needs a lot of work. </p>
<p>But anyways, the point I want to get across is what conquering the language barrier has taught me about life, and also how the cultural shock made me realize that the act of spreading cultural awareness can be a rewarding experience. </p>
<p>Please guide me in the right direction. :)</p>
<p>I deleted some parts and moved others around. Anyone willing to read the new version?</p>
<p>ill read. pm me</p>
<p>PM me, I’ll give it a read.</p>
<p>PM me! ill give it a read :)</p>
<p>Sure I’ll help out</p>
<p>I’d love to help you out :P</p>
<p>sure, just pm me</p>