<p>Well, I didn't garner too much help in my other two threads, but I think might finally be onto something.</p>
<p>Who wants to give it a read? </p>
<p>454 words?</p>
<p>Needs some revision?</p>
<p>Pretty rough?</p>
<p>Not in typical essay format?</p>
<p>Yeah?</p>
<p>(No seniors please.)</p>
<p>Im a junior, Ill read it </p>
<p>If you could read mine also thatd be great</p>
<p>Anyone else? I want several opinions!</p>
<p>REALLY? No one?</p>
<p>._____.</p>
<p>PM me. I’m a bit turned off by your description of it being “pretty rough” but intrigued in the atypical essay format.</p>
<p>I’m a senior tho.</p>
<p>I’m applying to UChicago, Swarthmore, Haverford, Carleton, Bowdoin, Tufts, Pomona, UCs, Amherst. If you feel comfortable, PM me.</p>
<p>I’d love to read 
Im a junior and im a newbie but if its alright with you, email me -> <a href="mailto:mudfoot_rox@hotmail.com">mudfoot_rox@hotmail.com</a>.</p>