FEEL LIKE EDITING?????? 1st draft

Colleges & Universities A-Z Yale University
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<p>hey guyss! ya'll know the drill (i'll check your history, pm you, you make my essay better, make me happpy, i send you a huge virtual kiss, etc etc)</p>

<p>some specifics</p>

<p>-its long. too long. any reduncies and using 10 words for 2 kinda thing would be great if u can fix</p>

<p>-its sort of a sob story. i've gotten to the point where i'm above this issue, and i really really dont want it to sound like it, so it does let me kno</p>

<p>-first draft, just whipped it up, half the time i'm talking with the sophistication of a 12 year old, so beware, any suggestions would be nice</p>

<p>have fuunnn!!! and THANKS in advance!</p>

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<p>anyone??</p>

<p>10char</p>

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<p>buuuuuuuuuuuuuuump</p>

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<p>i will read it!</p>

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<p>sure, send it over if you want. =]
im good with cutting unnecessary words: i’ve cut a whole PARAGRAPH in a go in my essays, hows that for cutting-skills? =]</p>

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<p>buuuuuuuuump</p>

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<p>bumpbumpbump</p>

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<p>I am good at giving suggestions/editing if you would like me to!</p>