<p>Please Grade this Essay,</p>
<p>this is not a 12 essay, so please bear w/ me, i would like to ask for your great insights if you dont mind, thx again</p>
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<h2> There is, of course, no legitimate branch of science that enbales us to predict the future accurately. Yet the degree of change in the world is so overwhelming and so promising that the future, I believe, is far righter than anyone has contemplated since the end of the Second World War.</h2>
<h2>Assignment - Is the world changing for the better? Plan and write......</h2>
<p>I agree without a doubt that the technology has offered us convience and comfort. Yet, as satisfied by modern technological advances as I am, I cannot ignore the danger technology posts on the world. Indeed, the world is changing, but for the better or for the worse? As we take technology for grantd, we cannot disregard the path technology is leading the world into.</p>
<p>Sitting infront of a computer and play computer games has always been my biggest enjoyment, despite people around me consider it as a vice, as they discuss over my personal habits. As the world is changing, people are gradually turning towards technologies such as televisions and computers. I cannot contradict the truth - these modern technologies do comfort me in a convinient way. However, I cannot, nor shall anyone, overlook the vice of these devices. An example can be drawn from the United States alone; the majority of Americans are so fantacized by television, causing obesity to become one of the biggest and most common disease in America.</p>
<p>Other than the threats post on individuals, technology can also put a civilization in danger. As tensions between countries rise helplessly, due to different political, economical or even cultural differences, every country is forced to arm itself from others. Unfortunately, as the world is changing, so is technology, and further affects the weapons nations invent. As weapons evolve, they become stronger and more capable of demolish civilizations. While some people live in harmony, others suffer from the hazard of technology.</p>
<p>--Should i Agree or Disagree? Which will get me a better score?--</p>
<p>The world is constantly changing as technology progresses. But is the world chaginng for the better? In my opinion, yes, but with a cost that is unbearable to many people.</p>
<p>The world is constantly changing as technology progresses. But is the world chaginng for the better? In my opinion, no, because the technologt brings far more menaces than benefits.</p>