hows this for a Personal statement?

Applying to College
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<p>I'll read it (may I?)</p>

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<p>I would love to read it...</p>

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<p>ill have a go with it! PM me</p>

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<p>An overwhelming response, indeed!</p>

<p>PMed to every one but I am sending it tomorrow!!</p>

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<p>I'll read it, pm me</p>

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<p>i'll read it, Pm me</p>

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<p>PM me too, i'll read it</p>

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<p>i'll read it, PM me....</p>

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<p>if you still need readers/feedback, ill check it out to the best of my abilities</p>

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<p>I sent in the app. on the 10th but I have PMed it to everyone by using the semicolon option. I dont know if it worked.</p>