<p>the prompt was- Describe the world you come from for example, your family, community or school and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>
<p>Preferably an adult rather then a highschool student, someone who is familiar with and experienced in the personal statement revision process.</p>
<p>I’ll read it for you!</p>
<p>I’m not an adult, but I have several years of experience as a tutor and writing coach, and I’ve edited a bunch of essays on CC so far this summer…so hopefully I could be of help to you! 
Feel free to PM me at your leisure.</p>
<p>I’ll read it, just PM me</p>
<p>i would like to read it as well.</p>