<p>If you do (which would be FANtastic), post your link after the grade and I'll try to grade back ASAP.</p>
<p>p.s. if there is any errors in history or the harry potter series, SORRY! :(</p>
<p>Is real success achieved only by people who accomplish goals and solve problems on their own?</p>
<p>Real success can be achieved when people accomplish goals and plans as a team. Most modern era leaders need advisers to define their goals. Historically speaking, the success of the birth of the new country America could not be accomplished on their own. Another example would be the series of Harry Potter. The three students' success was achieved with a lot of help along the way. Several examples in literature and history show how success can, probably, be only achieved if there are advisers, helpers, and supporters along the way. </p>
<p>As demonstrated throughout Year 1 to Year 7 of the series of Harry Potter, the main protagonist could not accomplish the goals given to him without the extra help from his peers. In the fourth book, Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire, Harry Potter was chosen to represent the school in the Triwizard Tournament, a periodic event where all the neighboring magical schools come and battle the obstacles given to them. The first event was to defeat a dragon. The second was to accomplish many underwater feats to retrieve a fried. The third task was to go through a maze, while defeating monsters in his or her way. He defeated it, all of it. But the road that brought him to his success would be a friend, Hermonie, a servant, Dobby the Elf, and a classmate, Cedric Diegory. This shows how success cannot be achieved alone, but achieved as a group to accomplish goals and solve problems together. </p>
<p>America was not born as a result of one person. The most prominent example would be the Revolutionary War. Although many consider the win for America was all solely because of George Washington, the colonist's general, it was actually more, a lot more. The colonist's involvement in the success includes soldiers, farmers, etc. They provided supplies for the armies with food, weapons, etc. Even as a general, George Washington had lieutenants and other high officers that help recommended certain routes and ideas that helped the success of the war. The success of the Revolutionary War was achieved by many many people who helped accomplish the goals and solve the problems as a group. </p>
<p>Many people think that only those whose accomplishment are truly their own can be claimed successful. On the contrary, as demonstrated in both fiction and history, real success can only be achieved by groups of people. Without the help of everyone involved, America would probably still be the 13 colonies. In the same manner, Harry Potter would not have survived even the first event of the Triwizard Tournament. As shown by the results of everyone who helped both George Washington and Harry Potter, real success can ONLY be achieved by supporters, advisers, and helpers along the way.</p>