<p>Well I wrote the first draft of my essay and I am wondering if it is not a good idea to submit something like this because I could offend some people. I mean I don't feel like it should but obviously not everyone shares my viewpoints. Anyway could anyone read it and let me know what you think. Also I know its not so well written right now but you'll get the idea and I'm not going to slave over it if I have to start from scratch.<br>
Anyway I'm only looking for unbiased readers, so to give you a heads up it is about Israel. Well PM me if you're interested.</p>
<p>pm me dude. ill critique it</p>
<p>lqvolleyball: are u really going to critique it? cuz i have been hearing on other posts that u might be using other people's essays for yours?</p>
<p>yes i will ask the jvhowube. I critiqued his essay. It was just two days late.</p>
<p>Anyone else please?</p>
<p>C'mon guys, I've read yours!!</p>
<p>I'll read it if you pm me</p>