Is this "Why UPenn" Essay Enjoyable to Read?

College Essays
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<p>Whatsup guys,</p>

<p>Anyone care to critique this "Why UPenn" essay? I'm afraid that this essay will be a boring read. Thanks.</p>

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<p>I'm not applying to UPenn. PM it on over. :)</p>

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<p>Oh, forgot to mention, please no 09 RD Penn applicants. :)</p>

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<p>sure send it over and im not an '09er</p>

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<p>sure go ahead :) im a transfer, but wont be applying to upenn so :)</p>

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<p>sure i go to another school already, send it over. :)</p>

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<p>me .</p>

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<p>sure... just go ahead and PM it over</p>

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<p>ill read as well</p>

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<p>send it over... pm</p>

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<p>I'll edit. UPenn is way out of my league but I'll be happy to take a look for you. Just PM it to me.</p>

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<p>I'll critique it.</p>

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<p>not applying to upenn. i don't mind reading it to give advice.</p>

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<p>Ze bump. .</p>

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<p>ill help you out not applying to penn anymore ;(</p>

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<p>I can take a gander - I did a lot of UPenn research before I decided I wasnt going to apply because I got in somewhere else early.</p>

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<p>i can look it over for you</p>

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<p>I can give you some honest oponinions on your essay</p>

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<p>Im done applying. You can send it over. (I didn't apply to Penn btw)</p>

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<p>ok im sort of new here and i'm wondering what bump means..</p>