Hey guys. So I’m 70 words over and I’d also love some critique. Please PM me if you are willing to read and give feedback on my essay!
I did the first prompt.
Just cut it down to 600 words. Now just need some overall feedback
bump
I’ll take a look
@wisteria100 Aight, I pm’d you
really need some feedback!
I could look at it if you want.
anyone else?
I can look at it
Sure
Unsure about my second paragraph, please help me out!