Looking for YOUR brutal and heart breaking criticism

College Essays
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<p>So I have a relatively lengthy essay planned for my desired schools:</p>

<p>Boston U
Northeastern U
NYU
UGA
Loyola U of Chicago
DePaul U
Oxford College of Emory</p>

<p>Now I want YOUR brutal feedback to consider when revising my essay.</p>

<p>I am very very grateful for any help, but must suggest that it be someone whose already accepted to college (class 08 and older)</p>

<p>Thanks. Just post stating wether you want me to PM or email it to you.</p>

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<p>Oh, I can be brutal!</p>

<p>Please, PM me. Hey, it's you again!</p>

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<p>PM me too :)</p>

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<p>i don't know how brutal i am but definitely honest. i'd be happy to take a look. i'm jealous you have your essay done. i haven't even gotten that far yet.</p>

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<p>Sure. I'll be brutal. :] (Class of '08)</p>

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<p>Thanks every one for the advice you all gave.</p>

<p>ELLTWO--
I know it's pretty early to start, but I figured I would start when I felt most strongly about it.</p>

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<p>PM it to me...I'll take a look at it</p>

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<p>Could I take a peep at it? Pm me.</p>

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<p>PM me :)
I'd be happy to help.</p>

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<p>Those were all of the schools i was looking at (08) I chose Loyola</p>

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<p>PM it to me!!</p>

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<p>pm it to me :D</p>

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<p>pm it to me
i'd be happy to take a look :D</p>