<p>Any takers? I haven't quite gotten to the second prompt yet, because i wanna focus on this one more. I'd rather it if no other 08 graduates read it, although this being CC you probably won't be competition for me as we are on completely opposite ends of the spectrum.</p>
<p>So any experienced, older readers i'd REALLy apperciate it. This essay will probably be the sole reason I get in anywhere.</p>
<p>Be happy to take a look. You have e-mail.</p>
<p>Thank you, so do you just want me to email it, pm, or what? Is your email the same one that's on here? And do you want the essay in the text or attached as a word doc?</p>
<p>I'll give it a look. PM me.</p>
<p>Here is the essay prompt:</p>
<p>Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>
<p>YOu want it by email or PM? And if by email, attached or in the text?</p>
<p>I'll read it. PM me.</p>
<p>Ill read it and edit it. PM me.
Btw Im also applying for 2008 but not to any UCs just Rice, UPenn, Chicago and Richmond. So you dont need to worry about plagarism. Rest is up to you :)</p>
<p>honest criticism. pm me</p>
<p>Hey I came upon your name and realized I read one of your essays before, but i'll be happy to read this one too. Pm me it.</p>
<p>BTW, this is an essay for the University of California schools, not U of C, just to clear any questions.</p>
<p>I don't think so, this is the first essay thread I've posted. Are you sure it was me? However, your name does sound familiar.</p>
<p>And bballboitd21, taking the advice of the sticky on this forum, I don't think i'm going to send it to anymore people who have less tan 100 posts. I hope you aren't offended, it's really not personal. But there are a few people who I sent it to, and have not heard back from yet. Sorry</p>
<p>ok np, i understand, i wouldnt either =]</p>
<p>what does pm mean?</p>
<p>here here!</p>
<p>PM means private message.</p>
<p>And sorry, like i said earlier, I'd rather someone with a few more posts. Don't mean to offend.</p>
<p>PM me, i'll give my inputs</p>
<p>ill check it out :]</p>
<p>hey im applying to UC too, so we can send our essays to eachother. that way we'd both feel comfortable. mines less generic and a bit more sophisticated than the essays you see on here, and judging from your post, i assume that yours will be on the same level. whatdya say?</p>
<p>I've actually already sent it in.</p>