Decision: Rejected
Weinberg College of Arts and Sciences
Objective:
SAT I: 1530 (740 R/W, 790 M, 20 Essay)
ACT: 33C (36, 29, 33, 33, 11)
SAT II: 800 Math II, 700 Lit
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.85
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 29/652 (Top fifth percentile)
AP (place score in parenthesis): Lang(4), CSP(4), Stats (2), Physics 1(2), Micro, Macro, APUSH, Psych (14 total APs by the end of senior year, however I participated in PLTW all throughout HS (IED, POE), which limited APs taken)
Also participated in an Early College program, have 11 units total throughout HS (5 classes) from local CC, with 3.5 GPA
Senior Year Course Load:
-AP Literature
-AP Government (Comp. and US)
-AP French
-AP Computer Science A
-AP Calculus BC
-Teacher Aide (AP Chemistry)
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): None
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):
-Established registered 501©(3) non-profit, retailing hand-designed clothing and funneling proceeds toward STEM literacy for the underserved.
-Co-established elementary debate league with friends, serve as judge/coach and participated in my school’s HSPDP team
-Nordstrom Fashion Ambassadorship
-FBLA (Web/media officer), small awards in entrepreneurship and e-commerce
-STEM Robotics/FTC (Web/media officer)
-French Club/NHS (President)
-Varsity Track
-Eagle Scout
-PLTW 4 years
Job/Work Experience:
-Worked at parents company for three years in manufacturing/marketing, as the company was declining and layoffs were made.
Volunteer/Community service:
-Hundreds of hours volunteering/tutoring at local library and as president of school service club
-Through elementary debate league, volunteered over 50 hours
Summer Activities:
-Participated in JHU Engineering Innovation. Placed first in final bridge breaking competition (had small news coverage)
Essays:
Common App: 9/10, Very good, talked about Nord. Ambassadorship and how it transcended my method of thinking and enabled my nonprofit.
Teacher Recommendation 1: Great, she was my English teacher and my FTC Robotics adviser. Showed me the letter and it was very good.
Teacher Recommendation 2: Decent, teacher was my PLTW adviser for 4 years
Counselor Rec: Generic? I attend a large public so we aren’t very close
Additional Rec: NA
Interview: NA (email went straight to spam)
Other
State (if domestic applicant): Southern California
Intended major(s): Economics
School Type: Public
Ethnicity: Asian (Chinese)
Gender: Male
Income Bracket: 100-130k
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): First-generation
Reflection
Strengths: ECs were great and fit my narrative, along with my essays. Course rigor was really tough. First-gen.
Weaknesses: I had one D in AP Statistics (made up and got an A), but was the result of extenuating circumstances (father’s cancer). GPA and tests weren’t stellar. Recommendations potentially could have been better. Race/location. Few/poor AP scores. No major awards.
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected:
I think I was rejected because there wasn’t something distinctly special about me, given location, race, etc. I though the whole fashion/non-profit/STEM narrative was unique and that I had a fair shot given first-gen and ED, but I guess it wasn’t enough seeing as I didn’t even get deferred.
I also was never able to visit, so my demonstrated interest might have been low.
If anyone could shed insight, that would be greatly appreciated.
General Comments:
The rejection hurt a lot at first, but I realized that there are plenty of other choices that I love equally.