<p>hi all, i had to write a personal essay for english and so i just wrote this thing and the more i read it and workshop it during class the more i think it could work as a college essay</p>
<p>my other one's about how i worked hard and broke the school record in track. i know it sounds generic and boring but idk how else to play up my athletics (asian girl) and tone down my lack of leadership in clubs </p>
<p>help me decideeee thanks :)
oh and i'm applying to columbia seas ED.</p>