<p>Haha, I really don’t know what you can add to your examples other than bs’ing an experience. What I usually do is start out agreeing or disagreeing with the presented question. Then I’ll add one or two more sentences to the introduction and skip a few lines for the thesis (I really suck at writing theses! Trust me, haha). For the body paragraphs (I usually write two), I start out with a topic sentence then expand it by adding some details. Then, I introduce an example, write about it, add insight, and finish it off with a mini conclusion. I usually write a bs’d experience then an example from a book. After I finish with my conclusion, I write my thesis. This is my approach and it’s not guaranteed to work for other people.</p>
<p>Although I haven’t taken a real SAT test, I had a SAT summer prep program. There’s an essay reader who grades my essay and I’ve gotten a 12 the last two times I took the practice test.</p>