<p>My "Topic of Choice" essay is looking kind of rough right now. Could some great CC readers PLEASE critique mine?</p>
<p>sure send it over</p>
<p>CC won’t let me message so i’ going to critique your essay here… Take out the dashes in the sentence ‘I don’t mean that sort of, I-sit-in-the-rain-when-it-first-starts-so-that-I-look-romantic-and-carefully-windswept’. It’s a good essay, you have told me a lot about yourself, amazingly I like getting wet in the rain too and it’s not for romantic purposes.</p>
<p>Fantastic, thanks a bunch! Should I put quotation marks around that phrase now?</p>
<p>Any other takers? :D</p>
<p>yes put quotation marks</p>
<p>Send it over if you haven’t summitted yet-</p>