Readers for SCAD Essay, Please

<p>My daughter is applying to Savannah College of Art and Design (SCAD), and I'd like a few more eyes to look over her essay. She is basically a shoo-in for admission. This essay, in my mind, is to help them really, really want her and award her the maximum amount of merit money she qualifies for. Based on her SAT scores, she qualifies for a scholarship of up to $15K per year. It's the <em>up to</em> portion of that statement I'm hoping she can maximize. There is a lower tier of scholarships that is up to $10K per year, so I think that that is the floor of what they might offer her.</p>

<p>I'll PM the essay if you'd like to read it.</p>

<p>Sure, PM it to me.</p>