Score my essay please!

<p>I wrote it in 16 minutes, after that my mind went completely blank and I couldn't think of anything else to say. I'll admit it's a pretty weak essay, but I would like to know what score it would receive!</p>

<p>Assignment: Is deception ever justified?</p>

<p>In today's society, many people believe it is okay to tell "a little white lie" every once in a while. However, these "harmless social untruths" can very often backfire. As illustrated in arguably the most vivid scene of "The Crucible" by Arthur Miller, Elizabeth Proctor tells her own little lie that eventually leads to the execution of her husband, John.</p>

<p>Before Elizabeth enters the courtroom, John claims that she is "the most honest woman" he knows and that she will admit to the court whether or not he had an affair with Abigail, one of the Salem witch accusers. Elizabeth is called in, expected by everyone to say that John truly did have an affair. Scared for her husbands life and reputation, Elizabeth, without thinking, says her husband was never involved in any relationship with Abigail.</p>

<p>Elizabeth's sudden "deception" later led to the hanging of John Proctor, leaving her in utter despair and confusion. This example perfectly portrays the unjustified idea that deception is "harmless" and "beneficial." Elizabeth's "white lie" and its effect on the outcome of John's trial exemplifies the horrible consequences of the justification of lying by society.</p>

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