<p>Hey guys, I've been working on my stanford essays on and off for the past couple of weeks and I can't seem to get the roommate essay down.
The prompt is: Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. What would you want your future roommate to know about you?<br>
Any feedback is helpful!! (be brutal) </p>
<p>Wassup roomy?
The first thing most people notice about me is that I am insanely tall! At 510 I tower over most of my friends and consequently, have unique skills in reaching highly-placed objects and making shade on a hot day. As your future roommate, I am very willing to offer my services ☺ I have always enjoyed sports and at the moment I am participating in track and field. Do not worry if you wake up late during the school week, I will be sure to race to the showers and save us a spot. When I am not running I am riding; most of my time is spent at the horseback riding stable near my house. My friend Emily and I are currently working on training a horse named Titan that is new to our barn. He runs around like a maniac when we put him in the arena but when he is tied up he sleeps like a baby. We seriously have to sing songs and shake him repeatedly to get him to walk on his lead line. After we get settled in we should take a trip down to see him, you can take part in the waking up ceremonies ☺ As for the little knicks and knacks that make me, me: I love to talk, sometimes too much, and write poetry when I am happy, sad, or simply cannot find something else to do with myself. I am definitely spirited so RUN in the other direction if you do not want to get covered in red body paint before a football game. I love meeting new people and cannot wait to meet you!
See you at the dorms,
(insert name here)</p>