Strengthening My Essay...

<p>I just wrote an essay, and honestly I know it is weak. I've given effort, and I'm in no way asking for people to write my essay for me, I just really need help with making my essay as strong as it could be. If there are a few people that are completely honest, wouldn't mind proofreading and making a few edits, then PLEASE let me know. All help is greatly appreciated.</p>

<p>Lets help each other out, I’ll read yours, you read mine :-)</p>

<p>I can give you some feedback and maybe rewire 1 section as an example but I def won’t rewrite the whole thing.</p>

<p>Thanks guys, I sent both of you guys a PM!</p>

<p>Any more people willing to help?</p>

<p>I will, but only if it’s not a UC essay.</p>

<p>I could use some feedback on one of mine too, but you don’t have to. I’ll read yours either way.</p>

<p>Thanks A lot!</p>