<p>So obviously I'm working on my UC personal statements. I have an essay that I've used for Common App that I think may work for prompt #1 (the one about the world and dreams and aspirations). I was wondering if anyone (preferably after the year '09) would like to look over this essay and see if the essay can fit as an answer to the aforementioned prompt.</p>
<p>Okay, so I've written an essay that I think fits the first prompt better. With less than a week to go, I was wondering if anyone (you know my preferences) is interested to read and provide feedback.</p>