UC Personal Statement - Can this work?

<p>So obviously I'm working on my UC personal statements. I have an essay that I've used for Common App that I think may work for prompt #1 (the one about the world and dreams and aspirations). I was wondering if anyone (preferably after the year '09) would like to look over this essay and see if the essay can fit as an answer to the aforementioned prompt.</p>

<p>Thanks. :)</p>

<p>i can take a look at it. pm me</p>

<p>sure I can take a look at it! I can edit it too. ;)</p>

<p>sure, I can take a look of it and tell you if it suits the first UC Prompt.
PM it to me and let's see!</p>

<p>Okay, so I've written an essay that I think fits the first prompt better. With less than a week to go, I was wondering if anyone (you know my preferences) is interested to read and provide feedback.</p>

<p>Once again, is there anyone who's interested in reading my essay and providing feedback on how my essay answers the prompt?</p>

<p>Thanks in advance :)</p>

<p>I'll read your essay for you =) Don't worry, I'm international</p>

<p><a href="mailto:biggumt@yahoo.com">biggumt@yahoo.com</a> would be glad to read it</p>