Very rough first draft of Common App Essay

College Essays
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<p>Anyone willing to edit/give suggestions?
Again, it's the first draft, but I really want to know if I'm on the right track or if I should just quit while I'm ahead.</p>

<p>I also want an opinion from somebody who is not my mom, hence turning to CC for help. :)</p>

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<p>bump
10 char.</p>

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<p>I’ll edit your draft :)</p>

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<p>I’ll edit it.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look</p>

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<p>sure ill edit</p>

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<p>i will read it! :slight_smile:
could you read mine too?
its not an obligation though hahha</p>

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<p>Hey whatsmynamee, I’ll read yours if you’d like…</p>

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<p>Thanks all! I got way more people than I needed so I sent a few PMs to some of you. Thanks to all of you for offering to read it haha :)</p>

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<p>Sure, i’ll offer some constructive feedback if you lilke.</p>

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<p>ME, will you read mine too?</p>

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<p>if you’d like I’ll take a look</p>

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<p>PM me and I’ll give you some suggestions :)</p>