Would this be a good Hook?

Applying to College
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<p>Hey everyone!
I developed an entrepreneurship simulation program in my school where
1) students made a fake business. Guided by their mentor, they were able to develop a complete business plan which they pitched to a panel of venture capitalists. This wasn't real, but it provided students a great outlook on what being an entrepreneur is all about.
2) students and mentors (VCs, CEOs, business professors and other entrepreneurs) met for a one-day conference. Students had the opportunity to talk with mentors about starting a business and other topics.
Would this be a good Hook? I am thinking of applying to some Ivies and colleges like Stanford and Berkeley.
Thanks</p>

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<p>that is not a hook, but it is a good extracurricular</p>