<p>wrencher94:</p>
<p>I think you already have a great understanding of what colleges are looking for. You are definitely trying new things out and I can see a lot of dedication. That being said, I can give you a suggestion on what pieces I thought were your strongest. I’d love to go into detail on every piece, but you have a lot of work and I’m not that fond of typing :)</p>
<p>Observational Drawings: </p>
<h1>16 definitely stands out as possibly the strongest in this album. I like the expressively quality of your line work in this piece. This one is definitely a keeper.</h1>
<p>To be honest, I’d say this is the area to be working on in your portfolio. I like how you’ve taken on the human figure, butI think it might be good to do a couple still-lifes with interesting objects. Use any medium, but make sure they are as detailed as possible. I really love your expressively line quality but see these possible still-lifes as a chance to show off your craft. You don’t have to grid a photo, but work from life and block your paper out into four quadrants and constantly compare proportional relationships that way. Have a value chart beside you and make sure you are really showing a variation in value. Remember to show your darkest darks and your lightest lights and the progression in between. I’m sure you are familiar with what I’m telling you but show your schools that you know it.</p>
<p>Media and Graphic Art:</p>
<h1>1 is good and one of the strongest of this bunch. I would be careful of how you are editing these though. Sometimes they can look as though they went through too many photoshop filters.</h1>
<h1>2 I don’t know how to feel about this one. On one hand, I do like the direction your taking this piece but I have problems with it compositionally. It’s sporadic and moves my eye around, but it needs focus. My eye focuses on your eyes and just stays there, without traveling across the page. Maybe your tone down the pixelated effect a bit more so that it looks as though your face is slowly breaking down or dissolving?</h1>
<h1>4 I’m highly interested in this piece. I think you should make this into a series and expand upon it. I like how the white shapes that make up your face look almost like molecular forms under a microscope. Maybe you could expand on that idea.</h1>
<h1>6 is nice</h1>
<h1>11 is also interesting but confusing. I think you should pay a lot of attention to these titles, and you should make sure that every piece in this section has one.</h1>
<p>Sculpture:</p>
<h1>8 sticks out here. I like the texture you’ve gotten on the pieces around it too. I think some dark values in the larger left area might make it more compelling.</h1>
<p>Photography:</p>
<p>I’d keep #3, possibly #5, #6, and #10. The other photos aren’t bad but I think you can be more daring. I’ve seen the colorful fields and the dark windows but be more daring with your angles or with your subject matter. But this doesn’t mean nudes or homeless guys. But pictures that are a bit more thought provoking.</p>
<p>I would be more specific on things but you have a lot of stuff, a lot more than what you need for a portfolio. If you have any specific questions on anything I’ve said or want my thoughts on something I didn’t address just reply or PM me. I don’t know what major you are interested in but if its something like graphic design tailor your portfolio to it. Your portfolio should show direction and potential. Anyways, overall I like your work, but I think you can be a bit more daring and an academic still-life or two could not hurt. Nevertheless, drawing aside, really work to make the more conceptual side of your portfolio strong and noteworthy. All in all, that will be what will set you apart from other candidates. Great work and good luck!</p>